A tall woman, in her early thirties, was walking back from the shop, a blue plastic bag swinging in her hand, humming as she trotted along the pavement. As she was walking, the hairs on the back of her neck rose, leaving a tingling feeling down her spine. She ignored it and carried on walking, though her pace had slowed. She frowned as she thought she heard a whining noise. Still, she didn’t stop, she was almost back to her house and so she kept going. She did stop altogether though, when she heard the noise again.
Jeez! This person is almost as bad as Captain Carrot when it comes to comma abuse. Ten in a paragraph of six sentences. I don't know whether to go on and hope that the punctuation improves, or hit the back button as quickly as possible.
Jeez! This person is almost as bad as Captain Carrot when it comes to comma abuse. Ten in a paragraph of six sentences. I don't know whether to go on and hope that the punctuation improves, or hit the back button as quickly as possible.
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If I open a fan fic - no matter how good it looks - if the grammar is bad the back button is hit! I have no patience for those who can't spell or use proper vocabulary. A lot of us take the time to spellcheck, etc. our stories, so why not others?
::end of rant:: :P
And after four years of reading fanfic, I've found myself grown a bit more tolerant of bad grammar. (Though given that it took my brain thirty seconds to come up with the word "tolerant", this may not be wholly true. *grin*)